Small piece of theme music

So guys, this is my piano theacher and I having fun creating a "game theme" for a suposed charecter that is killed by the villan in a JRPG PS1 era style. It took us less than 30 minutes.

What you think, should we carry on developing the theme?

https://soundcloud.com/thadeu-ant...reira-de-melo/minha-musica-tema-1

https://soundcloud.com/thadeu-antonio-ferreira-de-melo/heroic-theam

PS: Don´t mind hearing my voice in the background.
Nice work, I like it :)